TWIZZLER
March 21, 2022
Written in the format of a screenplay, TWIZZLER is a short film that highlights the relationship my father had with his own when they were younger. Some of the specifics are directly lifted from recorded conversations, others are purely written. I picture this being a project in the future, but for now I’m more than happy to share it as it is.”
— Samuel Menell
OPEN on a car pulling up to a gas station. The car creeps into an open spot, halting. The car sits silently.
Luke (O.S.)
… Two dollars a gallon-
CUT to the interior of the car. It’s musty and stuffed up with garbage sprinkled around enough to be noticeable but not in the way. Luke, an older man with a beard sits in the passenger seat. Behind the wheel is a younger man wearing a t-shirt, he pulls up his phone.
Luke
We should just go somewhere else.
Robbie
Well, there’s nowhere else, I checked.
Luke
This is a sign, I can tell.
Robbie
There might be a shell a few miles down…
Luke
…I don’t know why we drove all the way up here…
Robbie
… but I don’t know what the price is there either…
Luke
…Colorado is hard on my lungs this time of year…
Robbie
…It might not be worth driving all the way up, besides we could run out of gas…
Luke
…And I think Adriana knows that.
Robbie puts his phone down.
Robbie
Really? You think your own daughter tried to sabotage your health?
Luke
Wouldn’t be the first time, I-
Robbie
You mean sea world, twelve years ago?
Luke
Absolutely, I won’t forget how cruel she acted.
Robbie
She just wanted to have fun, I don’t think she was being cruel-
Luke
-I can’t believe it.
Robbie
What?
Luke
We are still at this damn gas station.
Robbie
I told you there’s nowhere else-
Luke
What about that shell?
Robbie
It’s fifteen miles up the road, I don’t wanna run out of gas-
Luke
Still better than the scam they’re giving you here, which you are willing to accept-
Robbie
Besides, I just had the car fixed… I don’t want to break it again.
Luke
It’s the same thing they did in the nineties when you were a kid.
Robbie throws his hands up.
Robbie
Fine.
Robbie starts to exit the car toward the pump.
Luke
I need cash.
Robbie
For what?
Luke
I’m going to use the bathroom…
Robbie
…
Luke
…
Robbie
…so you need money because?-
Luke
Do I have to tell you everything I do?
Robbie
Okay, okay.
They sit in silence again. Robbie looks to Luke. He takes out money and hands it to Luke, then starts to exit.
Luke
I’m going to buy something to eat in the car.
Robbie halts again.
Robbie
Oh, then could I have some red vines? And maybe a charger for my phone… I’m a little low on battery.
Luke
Okay.
Luke exits. Robbie shrugs then moves to the pump. He fiddles with the panel on the pump and pauses.
Robbie
Son of a-
Robbie smacks the machine.
CUT to Luke and Robbie driving down the road.
Robbie
They really should have put a sign up.
Luke
Maybe you should have listened to me and we wouldn’t have wasted all that time. Besides, it’s not a major loss. Shell is far superior anyway.
Robbie sits still.
Luke
Oh, I got you your redvines.
Luke pulls out a packet and puts it on the console. Robbie looks at the packaging. The package says TWIZZLERS.
Robbie
Dad, those are twizzlers.
Luke peers at the bag.
Luke
Oh, they are. Whoops. Well, twizzlers are far better anyway. I don’t see it as a major loss.
Robbie
Were they out of redvines?
Luke
Must have been, I would’ve grabbed them if I saw them. But I don’t see this as a major loss, twizzlers are pretty good too.
Robbie
Alright then…
Luke
Are you okay?
Robbie
Yeah, I’m fine. Can I have the charger?
Luke sits still.
Robbie
…
Luke
…
Robbie
Did y-…
Luke
Hmm?
Robbie
Did you forget the charger?
Luke
You didn’t ask for a charger.
Robbie
Yes, dad. Yes I did.
Luke
I would have remembered. I have very good memory you know. I wish you kids inherited that. It’s a pretty rare gift. Adriana seems to never remember anything.
Robbie
Like sea world?
Luke
Now that you mention it, yeah. She always acts like nothing happened.
Robbie
Because nothing did.
Luke
Robbie, you weren’t there. She was really cruel.
Robbie
I remember.
Luke
See, you know what I’m talking about-
Robbie
I’m saying I remember you saying that, not that I-
A light and beep starts coming from the car.
Robbie
Oh, shoot.
Luke
What’s the problem?
Robbie
No, no, no.
Luke
Did we hit something?
Robbie
No, we’re almost out of gas.
Luke
Can we make it to the station?
Robbie(sarcastically)
I don’t know. How about you check the map on my phone?
Luke picks up the phone.
Luke
It’s dead.
Robbie
Oh really! I didn’t noti-
CUT to Robbie pushing the car into the gas station. Luke walks from behind.
Robbie
Can’t you help?
Luke
I’d love to but my ankle has been really killing me.
Robbie
You’re sixty five dad, not eighty seven.
Luke
I don’t want to end up like my brother, I’m not taking any risks.
Robbie
Uncle Mark died from-
Robbie struggles to push the car toward the pump.
Robbie
-… Pancreatic cancer.
Luke
I still don’t want to end up like him… Driving coast to coast in a semi. What an awful way to live.
Robbie(Grunting)
I wanted to be a truck driver as a kid…
Robbie finally places the car near the pump.
Luke
Did you?
Robbie takes a step back from the car and wipes his hands on his pants.
Robbie
Yeah, you got me that toy truck for my birthday… ninety-one I think.
Luke thinks for a minute.
Luke
Oh, you’re right.
Robbie starts walking toward the mini mart.
Luke
Where are you going?
Robbie stops.
Robbie
To get some redvines and a phone charger.
Luke
The Twizzlers are fine.
Robbie
Okay… Well, I want redvines.
Robbie continues forward.
Luke
Please, Robbie. I can’t operate this thing.
Luke points to the pump.
Robbie
That’s fine, I’ll come back to do it.
Luke
Damn it Robbie, just do it now.
Robbie sighs then turns back towards Luke. He walks to the pump and puts in his card.
CUT to Robbie and Luke in the car. Luke is eating the twizzlers.
Robbie
… 2.50 a gallon there…
Luke ignores him.
Luke
Weren’t we supposed to get off there?
Robbie
Was that 143?
Luke
Yup.
Robbie
Oh my- Come on!
Luke
Where’s the next exit?
Robbie
I don’t know, my phone is dead!
Luke pulls out a physical map.
Luke
Do you need this?
Robbie
Where was that earlier?
Luke
I forgot I had it.
Robbie
Of course you did.
Robbie takes the map.
Robbie
Do you have a pen I could use?
Luke
Yes.
Luke pulls out a ball point pen.
Luke
This is my nice pen, don’t lose it.
Robbie takes the pen.
Robbie
Is this the pen from-
Luke
Does it matter? It’s a pen.
Robbie looks at Luke then starts marking the map where he needs to exit.
Luke
That’s ridiculous.
Robbie
What is?
Luke
How are truck drivers only able to carry three ton cargo on this road?
Robbie
Did you see that on a sign somewhere?
Luke
That’s not nearly enough to transport anything.
Robbie
I think six thousand pounds is plenty of weight. Didn’t you hate truck driving? Why are you so concerned about how much they can carry?
Luke
It’s only three thousand.
Robbie
What? No, a ton is two thousand pounds dad.
Luke
No, it’s only one thousand.
Robbie
Dad, come on.
Luke
No, you’re wrong about it.
Robbie
I’m not.
Luke
Fine, look it up on your phone.
Robbie boils up.
Robbie
I can’t… Because… IT’S DEA-
CUT to Robbie walking away from a kiosk towards Luke who is standing by the car. They are parked by a motel.
Luke
Which floor are we on?
Robbie
The second, room seven.
Luke smacks the car.
Luke
Damn it Robbie.
Robbie
What did I do-
Luke
You know my ankle is bad, and you know it. Why would you pick a room up there? Now I’ll have to walk up the stairs.
Robbie
I didn’t pick it I-
Luke
-Just like Adriana.
Robbie
Yeah… I guess so.
Robbie walks past Luke towards the room.
CUT to inside the room. Luke is lying down on his bed. Robbie is writing in a notebook.
Luke starts to pat around his pockets.
Luke
Where is it?
Robbie
Hm?
Luke
My pen. Where’d I put it?
Robbie
Oh. I have it.
Luke’s eyes shoot over to Robbie.
Luke
Why do you have it?
Luke shoots up from the bed.
Robbie
I asked for it to mark the map…
Luke strides toward Robbie.
Luke
You didn’t ask for it. I would remember.
Luke takes the pen from Robbie.
Luke
I have a very good memory, I would have remembered you asking.
Robbie
What about your ankle?
Luke
What about it?
Robbie
I thought you said it was injured.
Luke shakes his head.
Luke
I’d remember.
Luke starts to walk away. Robbie puts down his notebook and stands up.
Robbie
Why do you have his pen?
Luke
What do you mean? This is my pen.
Robbie
But Spencer gave it to you.
Luke
Oh, I guess he did.
Robbie
Oh bullshit. You know he sent you that for your birthday.
Luke
Maybe so. I just thought it was a nice pen and I didn’t want it stolen.
Robbie
You thought I was stealing my son’s pen?
Luke
It’s not his, it’s mine.
Robbie
But he got it for you!
Luke
Like I said, I liked it. I guess he picked well.
Robbie
No, you didn’t say that.
Luke
Same difference.
Robbie
No, it really isn’t.
Luke
Sure it is. I care about everything he gives me.
Robbie
Really? Because every time he sends you something you never text me or write back-
Luke
-You know I hate phones-
Robbie
-So? What’s stopping you from saying anything for ten years?
Luke
Are you suggesting I don’t love my own grandson?
Robbie
Then why didn’t you show up when he was born?
Luke
Well the-
Robbie
When me and Suzie asked for money you just ignored us? When we asked for your help you didn’t respond? Do you understand how shitty that makes me feel? Have you ever seen a picture of him?
Luke
Who?
Robbie
Oh my-… Spencer!
Luke
Well sure…
Robbie
Really? Then describe him to me?
Luke sits still. Robbie stands motionless then leaves.
CUT to Robbie in the car alone.
CUT to Luke sitting in a chair, he’s asleep. Robbie throws things onto his lap. Luke jolts awake then looks down. On his lap is a pack of redvines, a phone charger, and a dictionary.
Luke
What’s this?
Robbie
The redvines they weren’t sold out of. The phone charger I asked for. And a dictionary.
Luke
I don’t-…
Robbie opens up the dictionary and flips through to a page he marked.
Robbie
“a unit of mass equal to 1000 kilograms, equivalent to 2,000 pounds.”
Robbie throws the book back onto Luke’s lap. Robbie begins to leave the motel.
Robbie
You can find your own way home, I’m leaving.
Luke
You know…
Robbie stops.
Luke
I am really disappointed that you went this far out of your way to prove me wrong.
Robbie stands for a moment then walks over. He places his hand on the chair’s armrest and leans into his dad’s ear.
Robbie
I don’t care.
Robbie steps back and takes the redvines. Then he leaves the Motel.
CUT to outside. He gets into the car and begins to drive away. Luke steps out onto the balcony to look at Robbie.
Robbie stops the car, looks to Luke, then throws the twizzlers on the ground.
Robbie drives away.
CUT to the motel room. Luke is asleep in the chair. Robbie is standing over him with the Redvines, clock, and dictionary. Removed from his fantasy, Robbie sighs and begins to turn away from his dad. Robbie walks over to his suitcase then puts everything into an outside pocket. He turns back to Luke who is still sound asleep. Robbie then faces his bed, falls, and collides with the comforter.
THE END